Waking up and surrounded by an eerie darkness, Chloe Benson soon discovers she’s trapped underground in what appears to be someone’s tomb. Desperate to avoid the same fate as the skeleton in her midst, she musters all the strength she can to escape, however emerging back into her ordinary life proves to be just as dangerous. Someone wants her dead, yet due to issues with her memory, she just can’t recall who.
(WARNING: this review contains minor spoilers.)
I finished this book last year, October (2016) to be specific, and didn’t feel overly eager to voice my thoughts upon its completion, so suffice it to say, it’s been a long time coming in that regard. You might wonder how I could possibly still remember the finer details, and indeed, my memory’s not exactly fresh, however I can still recall what irked and disappointed me, as well as what stemmed the little amount of enjoyment. That being said, I had wanted to read something a little different than my usual flavours, and this one was ready and waiting in my library. What did I expect? Well, a mystery, of course – something that kept me guessing, kept the wheels of my mind turning. It was unfortunate that it promptly fell short, and the conundrum didn’t require much thought at all; the identity of the “villain” was clear pretty much immediately. There were several moments I questioned; “Could it be this obvious?” and lo and behold, it was exactly that.
Admittedly though, the beginning drew me in, and I sincerely believed the rest would’ve thus followed its strong onset. A woman, trapped underground in complete darkness; the narrative truly expressed her helplessness and her will to survive. From there, it morphed into something not-so-thrilling, and it felt much like a long wait for it (or rather, Chloe) to reach the conclusion I already knew was coming. Thankfully the book wasn’t that long, so I was able to force myself through the boredom without it becoming too much of a chore.
The character of Chloe was rather unmemorable, as despite how hard I try, I can’t say much about her. I always like to take the time to analyse the main protagonist, but the sheer lack of impression was even worse than disliking her, because at least then she would’ve made me feel something. The same goes for the rest of them – the domineering husband, the too-perfect other man; none of them had much personality, besides being convenient to the plot. One thing that I did find outrageous however, was the general attitudes of the authorities. Both the police and hospital staff were unrealistic, in that they were outright rude to a patient they believed to be mentally ill. At least in the real word, such cold treatment has the possibility to distress the patient further, thus I highly doubt the “shut up, you’re crazy” tactic is actually applied.
In conclusion: Have I mentioned how utterly apparent the “twist” was? Well, I’m saying it again – a mystery should have mystery. It should keep you guessing until the truth’s finally unveiled. This was largely a disappointing read for me.
Why does anyone stay in a relationship that deep down they know isn’t right? You don’t know why until it happens to you. It’s easy to fool yourself. To stuff things under the surface where they can’t hurt you. To persuade yourself it’s all just normal. Make excuses. There’s a fine line between craziness and love.
© Red Lace 2017
Sounds dreadful but thank you for your honesty. I’m a character based reader and when the main character is not fleshed out at all, there is no point in reading about their story.
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